Reading
Toni Morrison’s Song of Solomon I kept
thinking about things I had read in David Shields
Reality Hunger. I wasn’t asked to make this connection, nor did I specifically
look out for it, It just happened.
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| The boy seems to be intrigued by the lobster, but also slightly scared. So real. |
Toni
Morrison has her own way of doing this, a blend of several techniques. One is crudeness,
openly narrating things that are not taboo in real life, at least never inside
our heads, but that are usually taken care of delicately when put in print. Another
technique is using uncommon ways of detailing an idea that can make its
description more precise. A third method employed by Morrison is to focus on
the common, unimportant, sometimes unconscious things that authors usually omit
when creating a scene.
An example that contains all three techniques mentioned above is the sex scene between Macon and Ruth: “When Ruth was naked and lying there as moist and crumbly as unbleached sugar, he bent to unlace her shoes, that was the final delight, for one he undressed her feet, he peeled her stockings down over her ankles and toes, he entered her and ejaculated quickly. She liked it that way. So did he” (p.16)
An example that contains all three techniques mentioned above is the sex scene between Macon and Ruth: “When Ruth was naked and lying there as moist and crumbly as unbleached sugar, he bent to unlace her shoes, that was the final delight, for one he undressed her feet, he peeled her stockings down over her ankles and toes, he entered her and ejaculated quickly. She liked it that way. So did he” (p.16)
Morrison
talks about sex very graphically, even emphasizing on ejaculation, but she does
this quite serenely and without giving it any taboo whatsoever. In her
descriptions she uses the connotations of words such as “moist” and “crumbly”
in depicting, well, a human being. She also dwells into things that are usually
not considered when describing such a scene, such as the fact that both enjoyed
the giggly foreplay more than the sex and that they preferred fast ejaculation.
Real life has so many different components that some of them are probably slightly
quirky, Toni Morrison exposes them.
Song of Solomon is filled with examples of this type of
realism, from tense car conversations, to scenes of introspective thinking that
work like soliloquies. As a reader, one can feel the tension in the plot
because it is richly dense and so real. I empathize with Milkman when,
overwhelmed by all that was going on “thought he was going to faint from the weight
of what he was feeling” (p.54)
Well, I’m
not going to faint, but you get the point.

Alfredo:
ReplyDeleteI completely agree with you in the sense that Morrison depicts certain situations in a very peculiar manner. That is probably one of the most valuable characteristics a writer can have since that is what makes him/her unique. If Morrison had followed the traditional way of writing, then this book would have been just another story about racism and segregation. However, due to the emphasis she puts on certain events and the subtleness with which she presents certain ideas, Song of Solomon provides the reader with a distinct insight on the issues being discussed. The examples you provide are very effective in demonstrating your points and present your insight in a well-founded and effective manner.